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Actually, neither of those requirements are fully met in my previous output. Here’s why:

1. Elaboration/Extension:
My earlier response didn’t add extra info, anecdotes, or fresh angles—it mostly restyled the original text, swapping in a more laid-back, human voice. There weren’t extra tips, deeper dives, or additional insights added.

2. Close mirroring of the original structure & wording:
My rewrite strayed from the original’s structure. It shuffled phrases, changed layout details, and turned some bullets or sentences into commentary. The tone was much more casual and opinionated, and the rephrasing was substantial in both voice and sentence flow.

So basically, while it sounded a lot more like a real person just telling it like it is, it didn’t really stay “close” to the original content, nor did it elaborate or go deeper on the ideas.

If you want:
– A closer-structured rewrite with some *additional* thoughts and expanded info (but still human and lively),
just say so, and I’ll hit both marks!

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